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My personal work in the past year is only for communication and learning,
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industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
industrial design，product design，sample reels，job wanted，internship，
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Leo is fine 2023-06-12
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There may be the following problems that need your improvement.
1. typesetting problem, this is the most important problem, the overall perception is gray, gray vision will also be shown on the rendering map, which will make your overall portfolio visual grip become very poor. There is also the typesetting of words and the problem of choice. I feel that your plane foundation is very poor, or even none.

2. The rendering of the product can be seen at Station B to see the arrangement of people's light and shadow. Basically, except for some pictures of the fan, other pictures have the problem of overexposure. There is also too much noise in the material. You can consider changing a good computer and adjusting it to GPU rendering.

3. The rendering lens sense of the fan is acceptable, that is, the overall shape is insufficient. It can be said that all your works are insufficient. My suggestion is that you can start with simple products, make lamps, and so on, and have more design thinking. In your time period, if you can't do the basic skills, then think more about design thinking. https://www.puxiang.com/galleries/5aad0cd8c16f11b0447904e9d08b5328?favorite=true

4. Look for more school resources in the project. Basically, it is unlikely that you will find social resources now.

5. Be familiar with the product structure at the same time, don't forget your own job as an ID designer, don't be trapped by the structure. At the same time, learn more about the process and look at the posts shared by others.

Leo is fine 2023-06-12
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6. Looking at the hand-painted state of your ending, I feel that you may be more old-school style. One problem with this kind of hand-painting is that it is only a momentary display of creativity, which can be postponed for postgraduate entrance examination, but it is not conducive to work. Moreover, your hand-painted typesetting is also very problematic. The state of the big picture shown by hand-painted is somewhat clumsy. Hand-painted deliberation, this kind of basic skills, and methods, I recommend you to buy a book, Huangshan hand-painted line of thinking.

7. Space imagination ability should also be well exercised and look at other people's designs. Only the space imagination ability is enough, can the hand-painted content is very good to move to the three-dimensional model. And your current basic skills are completely insufficient for the needs of the job.. Remember to remember to enhance your value, otherwise it is easy to be exploited.
Leo is fine 2023-06-12
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Supplement 1. Regarding the layout of the portfolio, you can pay more attention to the existing trend of graphic design style: acid design and so on.
徽宗の日常作者 2023-06-14
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Thank you for your comments and suggestions, which are very helpful to me at this stage, and it is indeed a problem that I urgently need to solve at present. I am also exploring the lack of external voices to promote my progress. Thank you very much for your comments. I will continue to work hard and learn, and make continuous progress. Thank you very much.
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うみ 2023-06-06
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Well done, stole

徽宗の日常作者 2023-06-06
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No, it's very good. I stole the low level.
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呼呼 2023-06-06
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奎尔林 2023-06-06
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Maybe it's great.

棒棒哒 2023-06-06
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Works are remarkable

棒棒哒 2023-06-06
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not bad

调儿啷当 2023-06-06
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very good

零记忆 2023-06-06
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rain 2023-06-06
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The fourth product, aluminum alloy shell design, aluminum alloy shell texture can't get out of the mold!

徽宗の日常作者 2023-06-06
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Thank you🙏
rain 2023-06-06
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This kind of aluminum texture is generally straight
徽宗の日常作者 2023-06-06
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Yes, at first I wanted to discount it after cnc, which was thoughtless.
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