After sending the portfolio last time, I read the version that everyone suggested and reworked. I welcome everyone to put forward their opinions and suggestions. I hope that the company's bosses who are recruiting interns can help me push it in. At present, it is still 0offer...
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If the catalog doesn't work, use a pure white background, including the one with the watch. Look at the official website layout of other well-known watches. The gray gradient looks really bad, and there is also a dark corner. The hue of the whole work is gray, contrast and saturation are all adjusted. In addition, the latter two works can be done without, lowering the level of the portfolio and keeping 4 to 5 other works. Regardless of the design and modeling of the work, the feeling of the layout should be done well. Give you a comparison
It is not difficult to find an internship in this portfolio. There are opportunities for multi-network applications or boss. In addition, the modeling ability and texture of the last router are too out of touch, and the impression is not very good.
The typesetting and rendering effect have improved, but just like the suggestion of the elder brother above, some product details are not well done and are not very landing, such as some chamfering treatment, or the basic trunk ratio, the watchband of the watch (the texture details above are not well done, and it feels a little rough and unsightly), need to be dealt with. It seems that it should not be difficult to get an internship job.
To make a suggestion, the take-out electric car of the first work feels too "sharp". This kind of work will convey to people that the most basic safety elements of this product are not enough. I know that you are a concept product and have no landing experience, but the interviewer looks at the work. Do you have this awareness? Go and look at the electric cars on the market. Even the masculine locomotive style is very mellow and well handled in details; secondly, the proportion of your trunk is too heavy, and you feel that you have to tilt your head at any time. Moreover, you find that the boxes provided by the take-out company are placed horizontally. The advantage of this is that you can put more things so as not to squeeze the take-out together. Another is that you have not observed the delivery staff online. Most full-time delivery people spend their rest in the car at night, and their waist support is not enough, you can consider using the space in the back seat to optimize it.
the work is really good
Now the design is getting better and better
Keep it up!