Top typesetting makes people don't want to see it at all.

The work is so small, is it afraid of being seen by me?

Is the major a newspaper?

I like the idea of this portfolio very much. The high information density has its own impact. However, it would be better if we could achieve a degree of relaxation-the local focus/large-frame performance that should express visual tension, the local text concentration that should reflect information density-so that the whole page will have a sense of rhythm and the experience will be better and more attractive. This kind of performance thinking is professional, rational, scientific, but also reflects the aesthetic, emotional temperature. Industrial design spans art/industry/commerce, and what is needed is this kind of compound talent.

Which school is the classmate from

I don't even see which is the product

Don't make the portfolio too expensive, try to make the product clear. Interviewers usually want to see what they want at the first glance.

learning to learn

This is too strong

Professional