junior year, job search portfolio

2024-07-17 Home Appliance 9685 64 63

合一(实习版)

China · Home Furniture

junior year, job search portfolio

2024-07-17 Home Appliance 9685 64 63

合一(实习版)

China · Home Furniture

I have no internship experience
Want to accumulate work experience before formal work
There are many deficiencies in the works. I hope you can help me point them out. Thank you very much.
If interested bosses take a fancy to me, they can take me away at any time, haha

sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
sleep, nature, old man, caring,
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胖哒哒设计师 2024-09-02
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Go and take a professional photo, it will definitely be useful in the future

LINK-叶 2024-08-30
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Young people should be a little arrogant. when you look at your software foundation, you can refute what others say. they may not understand the product. it may be their problem

合一(实习版)作者 2024-08-31
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Ha ha, thank you, big brother
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神仙醋半瓶 2024-08-27
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Sketches are not indispensable either. Avoid putting parts that you are not good at. The portfolio needs to foster strengths and avoid weaknesses.

约书雅 2024-08-28
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Ha, ha, ha, ha, it's too real. Those little people showed me and smiled.
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okaybill 2024-08-07
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Suggest to change to

小蔡 2024-07-25
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First of all, the only highlight of your portfolio is that the layout is clear and clean. From the perspective of the work, it is basically too conceptual. You can start from the direction of household appliances or children's products. The second point is that the starting point of the work is good, but from the perspective of the model, the work is too simple. The design point of your plan is not prominent enough, but you can refine the model to make up for this, instead of a random box, in this way, you can't show your design ability, and at the same time, it doesn't give people a strong effect of software foundation. Besides the first work, the latter two don't describe the function of the product, that is, a few rendering drawings are hastily done, the detailed drawings, the functional analysis drawings, the use scene diagrams of characters, etc.

合一(实习版)作者 2024-07-25
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Indeed, you are absolutely right. Thank you for your advice.😘
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研梦创心设计 2024-07-22
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Find a training class to optimize the portfolio

151****0593 2024-07-25
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The training courses are all the same and easy to fall into the cliché.
xivincent 2024-08-06
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The training class just made a scene rendering, which seemed cool, but it was useless. Moreover, the moderator can explain clearly in rendering and typesetting. Generally speaking, the work is enough, and the company's requirements can be seen in the later period.
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铁雨 2024-07-22
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Advantages: 1. The rendering level is still acceptable, and the visual expression of the product is good.
2. have ideas, three strong than me
Disadvantages: 1. The level of hand-painting should be improved well, it is too untidy, and you can't see the appearance of learning hand-painting.
2. After the product design is completed, there are almost no functions, usage methods, etc., which leads others to see you as a thing and don't know how to use it. Where is the design point? This is much more important than rendering. The soul of industrial design is to design usable products, not high appearance.
Suggestion: 1. You can find one or two good works to learn, copy and learn its process, which is much better than blindly touching the cable yourself.
2. Practice expression ability and hand drawing ability
3. The most pertinent suggestion: change your career as soon as possible. There is no future in this business now.

合一(实习版)作者 2024-07-22
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Thank you so much😘, have come to the point, indeed hand-drawing and expression ability still need to practice
小虎工业设计实验室 2024-07-22
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The point is: change your career as early as possible. There is no future in this business now.
合一(实习版)作者 2024-07-22
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Is it true Du? Zha is saying that this industry is no longer working. It is not very clear about the market and industrial chain of this industry. Can bosses add some knowledge points to me in detail, Hee Hee😻
是我 2024-07-24
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If you are not a top school or a wizard, and there is no mine in your family, let's talk about it according to the process of designing dogs. Five years before graduation, your salary will not be very high, it doesn't matter, you will get used to it in the next five years. OK, ten years later, when you finally hold a lot of project experience and design cases, the change comes, and then you have no job.
合一(实习版)作者 2024-07-24
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Ah, so outrageous😭
linkkon 2024-07-25
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During the internship period, the salary was basically exploded by the assemblers . it was basically difficult to support oneself without working above the intermediate level. moreover, design companies were generally located in big cities and had high consumption.
合一(实习版)作者 2024-07-25
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It is true that the internship salary is too small, but it is also possible to learn knowledge.
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190****0304 2024-07-20
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Too abstract

At the beginning of staying in bed at home, the description of this function is not clear and it is difficult to understand. then, the additional description words on the following design drawing are too small. at first glance, I think the PH value test

合一(实习版)作者 2024-07-19
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At first glance, it's a bit good.
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李幸苗 2024-07-19
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In fact, I can't understand the old man's massage at home. I also don't quite understand it. I feel that it has nothing to do with walnut products. unlike walnut products, the final landing effect and software are only the key to landing and selling skills.

合一(实习版)作者 2024-07-19
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Yes, I feel like I'm in space.
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革命中 2024-07-19
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It's not bad in the eyes of students, but it's still hard to recruit people in the company! Come on, it's just a junior.

合一(实习版)作者 2024-07-19
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Come on, come on.
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Pluto. 2024-07-19
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If you want to do commercial design, don't use abstract design first. Some points you can't grasp easily and can't achieve the design effect. Of course, this is also the inertial trend of design in your student days. I hope you can do more design products close to the market. Also, twelve o'clock is not too much to play

合一(实习版)作者 2024-07-19
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Whoops, I also found it a bit abstract, so I have to learn a lot from the bosses and thank them for their advice.
Pluto. 2024-07-19
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Come on, as a fellow villager in Mianyang, I hope you can stick to industrial design, not design for the sake of design. most products are mainly function-based. just add differences. also, make good use of the identity of fresh graduates and make a good start. even if it is difficult to find, don't go to a small garbage company
合一(实习版)作者 2024-07-19
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Ha ha, it turned out to be a fellow villager, OK, come on
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L 2024-07-19
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The "personal opinion" of a rookie who has graduated for two years should improve the expressive force of the product. As the brother in front said, the first one doesn't know anything, but he doesn't have the desire to look at the back. It may be better to put the back forward and change the order. The first two functions are too vague. I didn't understand how to use the first one. The second solution is too troublesome, do you think you will buy it even if you want to stop yourself from watching your mobile phone at night, but it is only a junior who may go to the company for an internship for a period of time. Also, it is better to put four or five products in the university portfolio. Come on.

合一(实习版)作者 2024-07-19
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OK, thank you very much for your guidance
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Ekko Y 2024-07-19
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In fact, it is OK for students to make it like this, but your product expression is not clear enough, and there are too few usage diagrams of the product to understand how to use it, which leads to the solution you have given to the problem, which makes people feel that it is not very good.

合一(实习版)作者 2024-07-19
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That's right, I did find this problem, thank you
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Robin. 2024-07-19
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First, there is too little work. Second, I don't even know what the first product is for a long time. I have no desire to look at it. I just have one problem and one stone.

合一(实习版)作者 2024-07-19
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Thank you for your advice. there is indeed this problem. thank you very much
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