Summer internship portfolio, very immature, kneeling for advice, hand-painted has not yet been put in

果木烤鸭 2026-06-01

It's quite good. There is no problem with the software. I just think it can be changed some more and add some pictures, such as how the vacuum cleaner works to remove sundries from the filter screen, manual or automatic. It will be better to cut hair with a built-in blade, and you have to solve the problem of insufficient battery life. At present, the battery size gives me a little small feeling.
As for printers, I feel that there are many problems. The first is that the pictures you put are not very suitable for me. Different sizes of printers are aimed at different users. You are not of the same type, which gives me the feeling that the benchmarking is not accurate enough. The external storage of the silo is not necessarily a pain point. For example, in your third competition map, there will be no dust accumulation and storage occupancy problems. The external storage of the silo has several advantages: convenient replacement, clear material consumption at a glance, and a variety of materials can be on standby at any time. However, your printer has made complicated and easy replacement. The problem of material, you go directly inside the material, and turn so many bends, or right angles, is not easier to card, and then how do you change the material? There is a silo you are so small, change the material will be more frequent, and can only use one material, it is better to convert the demand point to the printer demand less demanding but sensitive to space occupation of the user.

果木烤鸭 2026-06-01

Finally, it is better to reduce the function of explaining your ID with words and replace it with pictures. For example, it is good for your vacuum cleaner to clean the bottom of the bed. It is more intuitive to display your design points with pictures or close-ups of products. The battery replacement of the vacuum cleaner, battery charging and close-up of the screen, how the wheelchair surmounting obstacles, the overall center of gravity when crossing obstacles, and your thoughts on the structure can all be displayed with pictures, there are too many words and many people are not willing to look closely. Your design point is easily skipped. There is no memory point. If you don't know how to start, you can look at the details page of e-commerce or how the same type of design shows the selling point, that is, the design point.

柯波格作者 12小时前

OK, OK, thank you very much, I will actively improve the

柯波格作者 12小时前

OK, OK, thank you very much indeed. I will do more research

我也说一句

超级森 2026-05-13

Rendering, typesetting optimization, or throw it to the AI, and repair it yourself

柯波格作者 2026-05-18

Okay, okay, thank you.

我也说一句

Leon Han 2026-05-08

The three works reflect the design idea of geometric shape stretching evolution, and the overall base is good. It is suggested that the details and texture should be refined and optimized in the future, and the control ability of surface modeling can also be shown more. Only represent personal views

柯波格作者 2026-05-09

Okay, okay, thank you.

柯波格作者 2026-05-18

Good good thank you very much, I add some curved surface products

我也说一句