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The 27th collection of works, asking for advice

15小时前 Other Industries 3128 12 28

The 27th collection of works, asking for advice

15小时前 Other Industries 3128 12 28

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China · Other Industries

I hope all teachers and bosses can point out many problems and accept them with an open mind.

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果木烤鸭 1小时前

The shape and overall shape of the handle still need to be adjusted.

One is that the shape of the handle should be bigger, and the place where the handle is held should not be nearly circular in cross section, which has been mentioned by some people and is easy to slip. The other is that if you carry too much takeout, the pressure is strong and it is easy to hurt your fingers for a long time.

The other is that considering the actual size, the octopus-shaped bottom will be relatively large. If you carefully observe that many riders' electric cars will be equipped with take-out hardware, the current shape is not suitable for hanging on electric cars, and the flat whole can be better hung on electric cars. And you can see that the handle for lifting heavy objects you investigated is basically a straight board style, so there is no turning point in the power transmission when lifting heavy objects, although the current one is for the purpose of storing the belt, it is easy to crack if the strength of the place like this turning point is used for a long time, so it is better to directly make it into an external storage. Reduce the volume.

There is also the use of semicircular slot buckle is not convenient, it would be better to make a sliding switch directly.

L作者 13分钟前

I learned it, but I didn't think enough. Thank you for your advice.

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几近崩溃白玉汤 3小时前

The first handle, communicate. First, see that you have made a semicircular groove on your outer surface. What is this for or is it pure decoration? If it is pure decoration, then its shape should be optimized. Second, at present, you have treated the part of your hand into a state close to a circular cross section. Many riders wear gloves and sweat in summer. The cross section shape still needs to lean on a rectangular state and is not easy to slip. Three, if you show the inside, you can draw a complete shell, and you can leave the structure of reinforcing ribs, screw columns and so on alone.

RZXON 3小时前

I feel that the first semi-circular groove is to facilitate the opening of the handle.

L作者 3小时前

Yes, the semicircular groove on my outer surface is to facilitate the opening of the handle.

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Stella 4小时前

1. At present, the quantity is a little small; 2. The overall typesetting and font can be optimized by looking for a concise portfolio. 3. The second work feels that the color matching can refer to 3C products and then color matching. If there is time, the modeling details can also be optimized. For example, some components, such as directly extruded parts, even if the edges are chamfered and then rounded, it will also appear that this product details more. The whole is quite good. I like the third work very much. come on, come on

泡泡龙先生 3小时前

Agree, the first work rendering texture is better than the second. At the same time, it is suggested that the second work should optimize the curved surface to show its performance ability. One or two more works are better. There is no problem with concise typesetting. The important thing is to show hand painting, software modeling, and product understanding ability, plus a little market analysis. Don't put too much energy on the text content, even if there are only a few pictures.

L作者 3小时前

OK, thank you for your suggestion, I will continue to improve

L作者 2小时前

OK, I'll refer to 3C products and thank you for your comments.

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